[Draw this again]Fira in a Gala dress

Good progress with hair, head, dress, flames and shading, but I see some mistakes. Neck in the drawing in April is too long and too thin, whole pony is definitely too skinny. And shadows on the black part in dress should be more blurry, the shadow should pass from the darkest to the brightest, not the dark strip on bright color. Try to change this! It's make your arts be better